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Can her next song not have repetitive chorus'?


indyRS

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I wrote 16 songs intended for Britney and I'd love some feedback about my choruses in particular. 

Here's a link to a PDF that includes all of my lyrics:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vo3e5KF34P8YG_wIWbvToBJ4PdYM5Wzb/view

I'm not a fan of relying solely on instrumental drops or non-choruses so I tried to make each one catchy and distinct in the pop tradition. I think one key trait of an engaging chorus is contrast with the rest of the song. This is particularly possible with buildup from a pre-chorus and a solid post-chorus.

Some of my choruses may be too complex. I do have one with a repetitive chorus but it's intentional- To show that she's weighing her options and can't decide.

I love when post-bridge choruses feature new melodic lyrics overlapping the chorus, so several of my songs have new material toward the end. 

If you'd like to listen to some pitchy vocal demos of my songs, check out this SoundCloud playlist:

https://m.soundcloud.com/jamaphone/sets/12-days-of-britmas

If you have honest feedback, go for it. 

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I conducted a poll after Glory's release to ask for everyone's favorite Chorus from the album. Here are the results:

%  Title  (# of votes)

 

15% Slumber Party (24)

11% Change Your Mind (18)

9% Liar (15)

8% Man on the Moon (13)

8% Love Me Down (13)

 

8% Make Me (12)

8% Mood Ring (12)

6% Do You Wanna Come Over (10)

6% Better (10)

5% Just Luv Me (8)

 

4% If I'm Dancing (6)

4% Invitation (6)

2% Just Like Me (3)

2% Coupure Electrique (3)

1% Private Show (2)

 

1% Clumsy (2)

1% What You Need (1)

1% Hard to Forget You (1)

 

Heres the link to the poll thread:

 

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What Britney needs is to bring the 90s back and do a 90s style album

Snapchat my heart

...One More Time

Born To Make You Unhappy (dedicated to my fans)

From the bottom on my explosion heart moves

I won’t be there (singing live)

etc

Please Britney bring back the awesome 90s sound back

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