JayTawndré surprise-drops New EP "THE LONELIEST MAN" 🦋

[JayTawndre]

It's my choice to share my music 🗣️!!! I will do it if a hater doesn't like it or not. I'm trying to get connections, resources, build my portfolio and grow as a music producer.

I'm proud of my work I've created from Groovepad, all my songs are eachly unique and bops. 🎶!!! 

These three beats are dark and mysterious but fun to dance and vibe out to. My favorite is "Ain't Fading Away" because it's urban, dark, edgy and mysterious. 🔪🔪🔪

Tracklist

1. Ain't Fading Away

2. Worth

3. Come Close

"Come Close" is the more fierce, "gay club" sounding track from the project. I think "Ain't Fading Away" and "Come Close" you guys will like 😊!!!

Thanks for letting me share, Exhale. Feel free to leave a comment! 

Warmest,

JayTawndré 

Edited Sunday at 10:57 PM by JayTawndre

[britisthecolor]

Good job! Worth is my fave.

[Brad90210]

Come Close & Worth are definitely the better of the two, it’s quite hard to imagine Ain’t Fading Away lending itself to a track with lyrics (if that is the ultimate goal) as it’s a bit jarring.

I’m absolutely not a hater and think it takes great guts to put out your stuff to the world, so hats off to you! If you are open to advice, just speaker critically as a consumer, I would advise:

1) Refraining from selfie / photos of yourself for the covers. You are not a brand or a recognisable figure, nor providing a packaged up, finished product / lyrical concepts. Very few producers indulge in putting their faces to a cover image - opt for modern visuals/graphics, create a more current and elevated visual thread and trademark that runs through all of your work.

2) Move away from speaking in third person and using terms like “surprise drops” as it gives a sense of anticipation that frankly doesn’t exist, and it takes me out of taking the body of work seriously.

I genuinely think some slight tweaks and a reduced need to have yourself as the “face” of your work would result in a more mysterious enigma type of producer personality and the work can be judged on its own merits, rather than your personality and the need to self-brand taking centre place.

But largely enjoyed these! Good stuff 😊

Edited 1 hour ago by Brad90210

[Baronesse]

1 hour ago, Brad90210 said:

1) Refraining from selfie / photos of yourself for the covers. You are not a brand or a recognisable figure, nor providing a packaged up, finished product / lyrical concepts. Very few producers indulge in putting their faces to a cover image - opt for modern visuals/graphics, create a more current and elevated visual thread and trademark that runs through all of your work.

2) Move away from speaking in third person and using terms like “surprise drops” as it gives a sense of anticipation that frankly doesn’t exist, and it takes me out of taking the body of work seriously.

Edited 41 minutes ago by Baronesse