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Britney Spears - The Escape (2018)


Pieceofdam

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Hi everyone, I wrote some lyrics a couple months and I would like to share it with you guys. I've always dreamt about Britney singing these kind of lyrics. Hope you'll like it et don't be too rude :pensiveney: .

 

I took the evening train and I think about you

I’m elsewhere, I’m gone

You’re everywhere in my escape, everywhere in my escape

 

I write to you in the dark night

Without regret and without remorse

An enraged horde tracks me and wants my skin

I escaped, I wait for the punishment

From the bottom of my escape

 

Chorus

One day, I’ll be back in the center of the light

Head up, I’ll take the place I left during my escape

The time of my  escape

 

Better be lost than be found

I’ve done too much to be happy

way to much to forget

From the bottom of my escape

From the bottom of my escape

 

Don’t blame me too much

the rumor is terrible

Much more terrible than me

I hear them from here

saying anything and everything

From the bottom of my escape

From the bottom of my escape

 

CHORUS

 

Bridge

It’s not saddness, it’s hate

Some ink blood in the veins

I’m not afraid of being caught

I’m in love wherever I am, here and there

You stay in the bottom of me escape

 

CHORUS x2

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I like your direction but I think it needs a little bit more work and then after that, we pussypopping all night, til sunrise :bang:  I also wrote lyrics. At the beginning my writing needed work now it getting there (COPYRIGHT you guys can't use this only me and when I release this as my single) it's called "The One" I still need to finish it but I really like it so does my friend and shes\'s a hard critic

 

 

Part of 1st Verse

"...Dare to say “you are a god”

Hiding in the dark

Afraid to be seen by some

Chorus 

You are the one

My life, my dream, my love

You are the one

That I sing this song

You are the oooone

You are the oooone

You are the one

You’re the reason why love isn’t gone

2 Verse

Who needs drugs?

When I have the scent of your lust

My addiction is growing strong

And I just can't get enough

You’re the one that I dream all day and night I can't be pleased..." 

Now I just need to finish :urite: 

 

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38 minutes ago, BritneyJeanSpearsOfficial said:

I like your direction but I think it needs a little bit more work and then after that, we pussypopping all night, til sunrise :bang:  I also wrote lyrics. At the beginning my writing needed work now it getting there (COPYRIGHT you guys can't use this only me and when I release this as my single) it's called "The One" I still need to finish it but I really like it so does my friend and shes\'s a hard critic

 

 

Part of 1st Verse

"...Dare to say “you are a god”

Hiding in the dark

Afraid to be seen by some

Chorus 

You are the one

My life, my dream, my love

You are the one

That I sing this song

You are the oooone

You are the oooone

You are the one

You’re the reason why love isn’t gone

2 Verse

Who needs drugs?

When I have the scent of your lust

My addiction is growing strong

And I just can't get enough

You’re the one that I dream all day and night I can't be pleased..." 

Now I just need to finish :urite: 

 

I like it! Keep going! :)

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44 minutes ago, I Always Sing Live said:

I quite like it though the skin part sounds a bit weird. Wouldn't "hide" be better? :sendinglove:

hide
hʌɪd/
noun
noun: hide; plural noun: hides
  1. the skin of an animal, especially when tanned or dressed.

in case you didn't know! :bang:

Yeah, I think it sounds better! I'm french so I don't know every word! Oops :p

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